IX. Thlog

WP3 has been a bit of a struggle. I have tossed around several different ideas for my WP3 and it's been a constant battle wondering if my transformations are going to fully capture the ideas of the article. At first I really wanted to focus on the entire piece because I wanted to capture the idea of the entire article, but I realized that if I were to key in on specific parts of the article, I would better be able to capture the ideas presented and be better able to express the ideas in detail. Going into the peer review session, I had a pretty solid transformation completed for my older audience, and I was able to solidify my thoughts and ideas to complete my blog transformations, but I hadn't quite completed the transformation for the younger audience (and good thing I hadn't) because I realized during the peer revising that my transformation for the younger audience really didn't have a solid message being sent out to the younger audience nor did it make too much sense coming from the article I was using, so I realized that I should set out to find a new transformation idea for the younger audience.
The peer reviews that we did this week in class were helpful. Through the help of my peers I was able to solidify some of my ideas and change others that they helped me realize didn't make all that much sense for my transformations. It was nice being able to see other people's work/transformations as well because it helped me see how they were taking their article topics and transforming them, and I think it was just nice seeing how many different ideas people had. Adding onto that, I also really enjoyed reading other classmate's PB3As because again it was a good way to see this assignment from other people's perspectives and see what ideas they came up with. I also really liked that we had the opportunity to respond to each other's PB3As. Not only did reading the comments on my PB3A help me, but so did being able to read the comments on other PB3As because it helped me see what I should watch out for in my WP3 that may not have been mentioned on my PB3A comments.